Matt Bellamy

Hey there! I really felt the emotion in this poem. Also, I like the metaphor in the title. And since it's a metaphor, you don't need the quotation marks so ...

Ooh, I like this! I really feel like music has such emotional importance, both playing and listening, so I definitely approve of this poem. Firstly, I like the way it ...

Hello! The first thing I notice about this poem is the elipses everywhere. I don't think they are necessary in any part of the poem and they distract the reader ...

Hello! This is quite a pleasing poem. The blue does make it a bit difficult to read, though. I was a bit concerned at first because you seemed to be ...

Hello! I really like this poem. It flows beautifully, the rhyming is not forced at all and it skips along nicely. It's also very strong - vivid description and it's ...

Hey there! I like the concept of this poem. A couple of things, though: A lonely bus stop Soon comforted by someone sitting This sounds a little strange because there ...

Hello! This has potential, it just isn't very strong at the moment. First, a few niggly things: I think the elipses at the end of the fourth line are unnecessary. ...

Hey, I'm back! I like the revisions you've done, particularly the imagery you've added: cloaking myself with the shadows of others. I want to feel the brilliant sunlight. I'm creeping ...

Hello! I don't tend to read what other people have said already, so apologies if I'm repeating anybody. Let's go! The night she died was one worth remembering, it was ...

Hello! This has potential, just a few things though: I'm sick of being anonymous. Hiding in the depths of dark. The full stop at the end of this sentence makes ...

The old thread was getting long so let's continue from the last word posted there. The way this game works is, you read the word in the latest post and ...

Please review my dried fruit!

An emotional carcass of a poem. Needed to be written, for my own sanity. Curse working in a supermarket. Anyway, let me know what you think. It’s surprising how much ...

Hello! This is a very interesting piece. There are a few ideas in here which I think could definitely be expanded on. For example, the "melancholy blossom who always smiles" ...

Hello! I quite liked this piece. It's written in a very narrative kind of way, very observant. I do like the style of writing, however I think that in some ...